tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post3760408818747208224..comments2023-11-03T04:49:04.527-07:00Comments on The Anti-Wife: Opening my mindThe Anti-Wifehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02027321787352577548noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-69655179470588240022007-04-19T11:04:00.000-07:002007-04-19T11:04:00.000-07:00Words: just, really, that, of, so. Passive voice ...Words: just, really, that, of, so. <BR/><BR/>Passive voice is a fight for me too. <BR/><BR/>Thank dog for computers! I have 2 Word docs open - the original draft and her suggestions. I'm correcting and inserting into both as I go. When that's finished I'll read through hers to see if I can live with the revised order. <BR/><BR/>This is incredibly tedious, but a tremendous learning experience. I am making progress, but never fast enough for timetable!The Anti-Wifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02027321787352577548noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-85298673852579034532007-04-19T10:52:00.000-07:002007-04-19T10:52:00.000-07:00Oh sorry to have taken so long, but I finally got ...Oh sorry to have taken so long, but I finally got back to the blogroll on my site! Keep at work on your book.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-49631287569304791272007-04-19T10:50:00.000-07:002007-04-19T10:50:00.000-07:00Hey there, it sounds like you have a nice relation...Hey there, it sounds like you have a nice relationship in your author friend. It's hard to decide what criticism to accept and what to reject. Just make the changes and see how it feels. At least we have the benefit of computer cutting and pasting. Can you imagine doing this by typewriter? What words stop your flow? I always include "just" too much and have to check for that. Also, I check for passive voice. Hang in there. Sounds like you're making great progress.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com