tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post5663255893455314650..comments2023-11-03T04:49:04.527-07:00Comments on The Anti-Wife: Thoughts on Men – Part 1The Anti-Wifehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02027321787352577548noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-35810537722119780112007-09-30T11:30:00.000-07:002007-09-30T11:30:00.000-07:00It's defunct because, while parts of it were great...It's defunct because, while parts of it were great, the book as a whole wasn't. I'm not a fluff person. My original first draft wasn't perfect, but it was the best one because at 32,000 words it told the story and moved along at a nice clip. When I tried to expand it, some sections worked but many started dragging. I'm a very bottom line person and believe short stories - either fiction or non-fiction are probably best for me. It's something I'm still exploring.The Anti-Wifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02027321787352577548noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-51455086373184663002007-09-29T20:52:00.000-07:002007-09-29T20:52:00.000-07:00Why is it defunct indeed. There must be thousands...Why is it defunct indeed. There must be thousands of other females who can identify with your sentiments.<BR/><BR/>Are you deciding to be interested in guys again, after all that?John Robisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07407165016025447113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-12063713639162812532007-09-29T18:18:00.000-07:002007-09-29T18:18:00.000-07:00I also thought this was moving and I really wanted...I also thought this was moving and I really wanted to read more. I can easily see this as a book I'd pull off the shelf and buy.Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11794946908789120139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-17809546804726119252007-09-29T09:45:00.000-07:002007-09-29T09:45:00.000-07:00I agree with Kim, why is this defunct? I'm glad yo...I agree with Kim, why is this defunct? I'm glad you are including it here for us to read, but why defunct? This is moving and intriguing. CAn't wait to read more.Ello - Ellen Ohhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311917335471167591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-6878325940897025522007-09-29T05:01:00.000-07:002007-09-29T05:01:00.000-07:00Acute and articulate observations.Acute and articulate observations.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-50053649046721934212007-09-28T14:01:00.000-07:002007-09-28T14:01:00.000-07:00Oh, why is this defunct? I want to read more.Did ...Oh, why is this defunct? I want to read more.<BR/><BR/>Did you not finish? Didn't find a publisher? Not have your heart in it anymore? <BR/><BR/>I think so many people could relate to a lot of this, and by "so many", I mean, me.<BR/><BR/>I'm looking forward to part 2 already.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for the comments on my blog.kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07393608709089617036noreply@blogger.com