tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post8683942339214534215..comments2023-11-03T04:49:04.527-07:00Comments on The Anti-Wife: Lesson 5 - instructor's evaluationThe Anti-Wifehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02027321787352577548noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-16098749039139158862008-04-01T17:12:00.000-07:002008-04-01T17:12:00.000-07:00thanks for sharing, AW. i think you're doing great...thanks for sharing, AW. i think you're doing great and we're learning with you and through you. it's mind blowing how much one can learn on the craft!cindyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911692378593865493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-60319882942936309212008-03-31T09:24:00.000-07:002008-03-31T09:24:00.000-07:00Oh, this instructor would have her work cut out fo...Oh, this instructor would have her work cut out for her if she got a piece of my writing to critique! Omniscient writing is my own personal Waterloo. I have had to go back to my WIP and change every scene so that the POV is only my protaganist's. I cannot resist giving everyone's view, and I have learned that this is a huge no-no. <BR/><BR/>Once again, this is so helpful, and it is certainly something I need to have hammered in.Mary Witzlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06458299046574564155noreply@blogger.com