tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post8976456951903328977..comments2023-11-03T04:49:04.527-07:00Comments on The Anti-Wife: Pitch ideasThe Anti-Wifehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02027321787352577548noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-31639449686019444332008-01-23T09:09:00.000-08:002008-01-23T09:09:00.000-08:00Thanks for the comments everyone.Heather, Thanks f...Thanks for the comments everyone.<BR/><BR/>Heather, <BR/>Thanks for snooping and come back any time.The Anti-Wifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02027321787352577548noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-5501721605409209992008-01-22T20:48:00.000-08:002008-01-22T20:48:00.000-08:00Hmmm... snooping around your blog. I like your fir...Hmmm... snooping around your blog. I like your first pitch, fwiw.Heather Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11634399663804195312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-31662542451710574892008-01-21T19:03:00.000-08:002008-01-21T19:03:00.000-08:00I like both of these but 2 struck me the best!I like both of these but 2 struck me the best!Ello - Ellen Ohhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311917335471167591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-71236216425055784792008-01-21T10:30:00.000-08:002008-01-21T10:30:00.000-08:00I like both, but I definitely like number 2 better...I like both, but I definitely like number 2 better! #2!! :*)Tyhitia Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14070000168178880911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-91182172379722102282008-01-21T10:17:00.000-08:002008-01-21T10:17:00.000-08:00I like both ideas, but Pitch 2 made my laugh -- go...I like both ideas, but Pitch 2 made my laugh -- go with it!!<BR/>~"Cult" SisterJean B - Stanwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06074767746365002727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-65715620459179380752008-01-21T09:08:00.000-08:002008-01-21T09:08:00.000-08:00Ooooh, I love number two!!It's sassy and unique an...Ooooh, I love number two!!<BR/>It's sassy and unique and got me smiling right away. Something different. Go for it!<BR/>And good luck.<BR/><BR/>BTW, for me, number one sounded like it could be any book already written, published, and sitting on a shelf somewhere.Holly Kennedyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02336717023482533615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-74631720317061086562008-01-20T16:49:00.000-08:002008-01-20T16:49:00.000-08:00I like the sense of urgency in #1.I like the sense of urgency in #1.Maya Reynoldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12791278987339976101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-35458366668647672822008-01-20T13:12:00.000-08:002008-01-20T13:12:00.000-08:00I've now read everyone's comments, but I stick wit...I've now read everyone's comments, but I stick with my first reaction: I like the way both of these sound and I would definitely want to read them. I do agree with writerkat that it would be better to know WHY the case has to be solved in 48 hours, but I still think this one sounds intriguing. And I loved the pun in the second one too.Mary Witzlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06458299046574564155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-27752198644682853242008-01-19T16:50:00.000-08:002008-01-19T16:50:00.000-08:00"...why he waited until Thursday night at 7:30 p.m...<I>"...why he waited until Thursday night at 7:30 p.m. to drop in on them."</I><BR/><BR/>That pun did it for me. I prefer the second.Liane Spicerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05035607144500219524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-9051649978417826852008-01-19T14:41:00.000-08:002008-01-19T14:41:00.000-08:00i vote for one.i'm not sure what's going on with t...i vote for one.<BR/>i'm not sure what's going on with the second, are they in church? what is a peony group? reading group?<BR/><BR/>for me, first pitch has more ... urgency and personal risk / danger. you set up all up for us. i also like the idea of one protag versus a "group" of ladies.<BR/><BR/>the second sounds like it could be comical and mysterious. the first like it is intense with danger.cindyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911692378593865493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-50036284376119134542008-01-19T10:04:00.000-08:002008-01-19T10:04:00.000-08:00Do the cult ladies version. You will have a guaran...Do the cult ladies version. You will have a guaranteed audience - they will be looking for themselves in your portrayal. They will love and exalt you, and promote you Grand High Poobah-ette. ;)<BR/><BR/>Anonymous Sister of Anti-WifeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-67336563525911552442008-01-19T02:34:00.001-08:002008-01-19T02:34:00.001-08:00Oops (I thought there were only 4 votes. I suck at...Oops (I thought there were only 4 votes. I suck at math just the same)Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11794946908789120139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-42307728438692647902008-01-19T02:34:00.000-08:002008-01-19T02:34:00.000-08:00Oh, sorry to do this because my vote will make eac...Oh, sorry to do this because my vote will make each choice at 50%, but I like the second one better. It sounds like it has more energy.<BR/>Go with what is more fun.<BR/>;-)Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11794946908789120139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-73718785683945694812008-01-18T22:18:00.000-08:002008-01-18T22:18:00.000-08:00The second one hooked me. The first one is just a...The second one hooked me. The first one is just about someone trying to prove her innocence, something the pitch already guarantees.Stephen Parrishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16883165490847664389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-84356614798878280732008-01-18T22:13:00.000-08:002008-01-18T22:13:00.000-08:00I love the second one. It's so, well, mysterious....I love the second one. It's so, well, mysterious. And ripe with posibilities.<BR/><BR/>The first one is good, but the 48 hours thing sounds too dramatic for my taste. I would have to be sold why it's so important to have the case closed in that amount of time.WriterKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01966875820095185649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-35405768397632044322008-01-18T14:36:00.000-08:002008-01-18T14:36:00.000-08:00I'm with Precie, I like the first one best...I'm with Precie, I like the first one best...Merry Monteleonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09435956005780500310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8410616401062748816.post-12319040684761696622008-01-18T12:48:00.000-08:002008-01-18T12:48:00.000-08:00I like Pitch 1...but I think the story would hinge...I like Pitch 1...but I think the story would hinge on several factors, like the line of work she's in, who the other suspects would be, etc. <BR/><BR/>Overall, I think it's intriguing from the very start, and I'd want to read more!Preciehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05071233480999640713noreply@blogger.com